I have this delighted vision of Veronica catching sidelong glimpses of Jason Dohring biting students on the neck while puling them into the bushes. She hunts down the student the next day, they are wearing a scarf around their neck...Is it Logan the femme fatale? is it the Neptune Hellmouth?I enjoyed the virtual fourth season a little too much.
I'm new to Veronica Mars, it has been helping me through the aftermath of getting hit by a truck. I read this and a number of other fics, carelessly not commenting. I'm now rereading this and making sure I comment. First, Thank you. I enjoy your writing. If you've published something I would buy it and read it.
I'm a little bothered that at the beginning of the story Veronica hasn't really changed herself, since at the end of the series she had run into some realizations. When she actually has to pay attention she confronts things directly (I like that in your story Logan runs more than Veronica, which is closer to what happens in canon and far from what usually seems to happen in fan fiction). Then, even when I was really upset at how much pain Logan was in and trying to reach into my tablet and strangle Veronica for hurting him I always knew he was a black hole of need that no one could fill. I also really wish she'd confront Keith and Logan's having to know every thing about what she is doing and being able to pick and choose what to tell her in some really definitive way. God that gets old. It's gotta. However, I think it matches what happened in canon so these aren't complaints. I'm impressed, actually.
I like that both Logan and Veronica eventually make some major changes in their lives and have to do some soul searching by themselves to do so.
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Date: 2016-04-04 07:14 pm (UTC)I'm new to Veronica Mars, it has been helping me through the aftermath of getting hit by a truck. I read this and a number of other fics, carelessly not commenting. I'm now rereading this and making sure I comment. First, Thank you. I enjoy your writing. If you've published something I would buy it and read it.
I'm a little bothered that at the beginning of the story Veronica hasn't really changed herself, since at the end of the series she had run into some realizations. When she actually has to pay attention she confronts things directly (I like that in your story Logan runs more than Veronica, which is closer to what happens in canon and far from what usually seems to happen in fan fiction). Then, even when I was really upset at how much pain Logan was in and trying to reach into my tablet and strangle Veronica for hurting him I always knew he was a black hole of need that no one could fill. I also really wish she'd confront Keith and Logan's having to know every thing about what she is doing and being able to pick and choose what to tell her in some really definitive way. God that gets old. It's gotta. However, I think it matches what happened in canon so these aren't complaints. I'm impressed, actually.
I like that both Logan and Veronica eventually make some major changes in their lives and have to do some soul searching by themselves to do so.