This is just lovely. You really do have a talent for writing, i love this style :) Also, you've avoided a happy ending, thank you for that, you've reached that place where it ends in such a way that we don't know what will happen next, but there is a peace with the story. Perfect!
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branchandroot
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Date: 2010-10-27 06:49 am (UTC)You really do have a talent for writing, i love this style :)
Also, you've avoided a happy ending, thank you for that, you've reached that place where it ends in such a way that we don't know what will happen next, but there is a peace with the story.
Perfect!