Oh, loved it. The voice is so very Veronica, especially the bit you chose for the tagline -- just pitch perfect. (This little drop on my cheek?) Could easily hear it in kbell's voice. (Although, embarrassingly, I've been watching gossip girl recently, so I've been hearing EVERYTHING in kbell's dulcet tones, but that's neither here nor there.)
I love how you capture this sort of out of control desperation. I mean, everyone hated season 3 vmars because she was a bitch, me included, but if you dig under that there's a lot of fright and confusion motivating it, and you evoke that very clearly here. Also, love the hint of hope -- still unresolved! -- at the end, and Wallace/Logan/Keith as a trio to the rescue, just on principle. lovely.
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Date: 2010-10-28 04:19 am (UTC)I love how you capture this sort of out of control desperation. I mean, everyone hated season 3 vmars because she was a bitch, me included, but if you dig under that there's a lot of fright and confusion motivating it, and you evoke that very clearly here. Also, love the hint of hope -- still unresolved! -- at the end, and Wallace/Logan/Keith as a trio to the rescue, just on principle. lovely.