Sorry for the delay in replying...a couple intense days here.

Working with canon has always been one of my favorite things about writing fanfic—trying to find those little incidents that weren't followed up in order to place my story in the VM world.

Thank you very much for saying my writing is getting better. I am working so hard on my prose and description, and I'm taking chances. I'll probably fall on my face a few times but hopefully it will all get easier.