vanessagalore: (V filtered)
vanessagalore ([personal profile] vanessagalore) wrote 2010-12-18 03:31 pm (UTC)

Here's the thing: I'm not really the one making it impossible. I believe these are all things that are *probable*, based on what the show did. Seriously! How were they going to do a season 4? La, la, la, nobody got hurt by all this.

I wanted to have a little comic relief, and yes, Logan and Keith getting along a little better, if only because Keith recognizes that they can't be sniping at each other when they're in such a stressful situation. I sweated over this chapter a bit, because the banter seemed forced to me and jarring after what's come before; hope it ended up ok. I do think Keith's basically a sympathetic guy, even though he's a cop with a finely-tuned bullshit meter, and he's not completely unable to see Logan's side of these things. (I'm sure Keith wanted to beat up Mercer and Moe as well.)

Interesting: Logan feels passive to you.

I have never been to the UK, so I don't think I can take them there and write about it with any confidence...besides, I think the UK has its act together pretty well as far as finding fake passports. You need to think sleazier.

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