You make an excellent point about the french braid!! I think I'll edit that part, keeping your thoughts in mind.
You're giving me a lot of credit on the fear part, because I'm not sure I was explicitly thinking about that...but what the hell, I'll take the credit! Because I do agree, Veronica is terrified of intimacy.
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Date: 2011-01-01 07:35 pm (UTC)You're giving me a lot of credit on the fear part, because I'm not sure I was explicitly thinking about that...but what the hell, I'll take the credit! Because I do agree, Veronica is terrified of intimacy.
Thanks very much for your help on this chapter!