I'm reading this on Christmas morning, what a lovely present it makes! The kids will just have to wait a little longer for their gingerbread muffins.
I always adore your love scenes, quite simply I think they are the best I ever get to read, you manage the balance between tenderness and eroticism so well.
And of course the backdrop of impending disaster just adds to the tension. Keith drinking alone in a bar, he's so worried.
Logan and Veronica's talk was long overdue, and again I think you always get their voices just right, even when they are being uncharacteristicly open with each other.