It's funny the things you say you like in this chapter. Maybe I am getting better at this?
Thanks for your help on this one. I apparently lost a version where I'd incorporated some of your word-o catches, and realized once I'd posted that I still saw them. I think I fixed them all, but maybe not. Ugh.
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Date: 2011-05-18 02:30 pm (UTC)Thanks for your help on this one. I apparently lost a version where I'd incorporated some of your word-o catches, and realized once I'd posted that I still saw them. I think I fixed them all, but maybe not. Ugh.