This is very very bad, i was fine like Veronica when i thought it was a PI, but you managed to ramp up the tension very cleverly with her pursuer being some one really sinister. As for the stoner guy, what an wanker.It's horrible to see Veronica at his mercy.
Btw will follow your advice regarding a better standard of buses if/when I do get to do my tour of the states.
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Date: 2011-07-13 09:36 pm (UTC)As for the stoner guy, what an wanker.It's horrible to see Veronica at his mercy.
Btw will follow your advice regarding a better standard of buses if/when I do get to do my tour of the states.