Thought I had set this up so that I would be alerted to ne chapters, obviously not as I missed these two. So relieved that Veronica that made it safely, but the cost to her o a psychological level is going to high, as you are already showing very effectively, I thought the dream was very well written, You steered away from making it too sureal, which a lot of writers do, but the odd mix of people and the way things occur instantaneously was really good. HOpe this means you are feeling better
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Date: 2011-08-30 10:19 pm (UTC)HOpe this means you are feeling better