VanessaGalore

I don't really know how to explain it. I'm doing okay with the Veronica POV, although I think sometimes the story gets so "interior" that it's hard to read (you get bogged down in her thought process). I know the broad strokes of my outline, and perhaps a more detailed outline would help me (but I have to tell you, YLD2 only needed an outline at the beginning, and then it wrote itself). Also, my two 'canons' are tending to verge towards each other, at least in the big character issues, and I'm trying to do something different this time around. So those are my issues, for the most part.