I love the small moments that you include in this story. I adore that Logan got choked up when Keith welcomed him HOME. Keith has learned to love and trust Logan. I really like the thought of Keith taking Logan under his wing and mentoring him. (Of course look what that did for Leo.)

The flashback to the events in "Donut Run" and the continuation of the present is impressive. What Veronica did for Duncan changed her forever and what Keith did for Vinnie changed him forever. Now they both have to protect each other for and from their mistakes.