Wow, Leo played them all. EvilLeo has something up his sleeve. I’m thinking he’s going to go after Logan now. He got a reaction out of Logan and nothing concerning Logan and his missteps were part of Veronica’s deal. So technically Leo wouldn’t be breaking any agreement with V if he went after Logan.
I love that Keith let V and Logan willingly sleep in the same bed. That makes me laugh because obviously they are sleeping together but Keith doesn’t have to like it. And the thought that Keith couldn’t sleep because of the things the three talked about at dinner made my heart hurt. Poor Keith. He’s just trying to keep his daughter safe. Kudos to him for suggesting V move in with Logan and transfer to UCLA. LoVe needs to get the hell out of dodge before the fit hits the shan.
I’m not really concerned with Wallace’s story right now but I’m sure you’ll have some twists and turns to grab hold of the reader. I’m thinking Duncan’s affair is going to come back and bite him in the butt. Maybe that’s Katerina’s plan???
I’m a little concerned about Briar Hill. Their plant is at the school already so that means V will be going there soon. I’m not sure LoVe will be able to withstand that kind of stress on their relationship. But you’re going to put your readers through the LoVe ringer, aren’t you? You’re evil. I’ve said it before, I’ll say it again. Evil evil evil. On second thought, you gave a lot of hot sex so maybe you’re only worth two evils. LOL! Evil Evil Vanessa!
Great job. Can’t wait for the update next week. Oh yeah and the mysterious password with Sugarpuss and the date was perfect. I forgot to comment on that last time.
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Date: 2008-04-28 01:38 pm (UTC)I love that Keith let V and Logan willingly sleep in the same bed. That makes me laugh because obviously they are sleeping together but Keith doesn’t have to like it. And the thought that Keith couldn’t sleep because of the things the three talked about at dinner made my heart hurt. Poor Keith. He’s just trying to keep his daughter safe. Kudos to him for suggesting V move in with Logan and transfer to UCLA. LoVe needs to get the hell out of dodge before the fit hits the shan.
I’m not really concerned with Wallace’s story right now but I’m sure you’ll have some twists and turns to grab hold of the reader. I’m thinking Duncan’s affair is going to come back and bite him in the butt. Maybe that’s Katerina’s plan???
I’m a little concerned about Briar Hill. Their plant is at the school already so that means V will be going there soon. I’m not sure LoVe will be able to withstand that kind of stress on their relationship. But you’re going to put your readers through the LoVe ringer, aren’t you? You’re evil. I’ve said it before, I’ll say it again. Evil evil evil. On second thought, you gave a lot of hot sex so maybe you’re only worth two evils. LOL! Evil Evil Vanessa!
Great job. Can’t wait for the update next week. Oh yeah and the mysterious password with Sugarpuss and the date was perfect. I forgot to comment on that last time.